The thesis in my paper is killing me. I know what I want to talk about but don't know how to wrap it up in a sentence. I also am having trouble with introducing my three sources. If any one can help me that would be great. So far this is what I have:
While most might read the article “Women in Power Are Set Up to Fail” by Clive Thompson and say that they agree, I say they are wrong! When people read the short stories “The Revolt of Mother’” and “The Birthmark” and say how much the man is in control, I say the women is. The power or powerlessness of people is not so cut and dry as you might think.
The thesis is in blue? Maybe or maybe not. It is kinda short but is that even come close a thesis?
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Hi Eric--Okay, most my say they agree with *what* in the article? Remember, your audience hasn't read the article so we need to know what it's thesis is. If you can give us that thesis then maybe it will be easier to show what you are trying to argue.
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